Wednesday 10 February 2016

Production Planning: Draft 2 Evaluation and Improving

> needs just a few shots towards the end of the womans eyes to remind the audience that the woman all links into the plot of the film

Wednesday 20 January 2016

Production Planning: Draft 1 Evaluation and Improving

> needs more intense music at the start
> needs a creepy scene of the woman - jump cuts to exaggerate the enigma